Week4- This week I read a blog by Chelsea from Avoca School District 37. She wrote about her favorite time of the year which is fall. She described with great detail the many reasons she loves the fall. She used very descriptive words that helped paint a picture for the reader.
Week5- See February 14th
Week6- This week I commented on Aneisha from the blog Flying High with Room 17. Her post was entitled Swimming in the Holidays. She talked about going to a place with her uncle where she jumped off a cliff into water and swam. She also had a video she made which was very impressive and brightly colored.
Week7- For this week I read a blog by a girl named Paola from Mr. Crosby's 4th grade class. She wrote an interesting piece on coral reefs. The writing was incredible for her age. It is very impressive to see students this young to be writing so well and on the computer.
Week8- This week I read a blog called Six Traits: Voice & Word Choice. It was posted by a guy named Chris who wrote about the use of voice in writing. It is important for students to have a voice in their writing so it can set them apart from others. Without a voice your work is just another paper.
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